An Endless Sea

He walked along an endless sea 

“Oh where is the end, I cannot see.” 

He walked along an endless shore 

“Will I walk, evermore?” 

She walked along an endless sea 

“This endless ocean shall set me free” 

She walked along an endless shore 

“Leaving here would be a bore” 

They walked along an endless sea 

“You’ll love it here, I guarantee” 

They walked along an endless shore 

“The sounds are something you’ll adore” 

They walked along an endless sea 

“Why don’t you just come with me?” 

They walked along an endless shore 

“You could see so much more” 

She walked along an endless sea 

“I love it here, don’t you see?” 

He walked along an endless shore 

“Don’t you know, I love you more” 

Author: Kaitlyn R

Work Cited : Kaitlyn R., The Endless Sea, November 25, 2019 

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  1. this is amazing! it reminds me about how I used to see how fast it would be to walk the Tillamook beach when I was younger. id love to hear this in a musical setting!

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  2. This was an incredible read. I felt like I was immersed into a visual while reading it. I love the alternating between the quotes and the repeating phrases, it really brings it full circle. Well done Kaitlyn!

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  3. Not only was this beautifully written but it’s easily read and it’s flow is very consistent. Keep up the good work Kaitlyn.

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  4. This is a wonderful poem Kaityln. It’s so wonderful it could be song. I imagine a beach on the coast and a man and a woman walking together on the shoreline smiling at one another. Like in a love story, you’ve done great job.

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  5. Awww, this was a nice poem. I enjoyed being able to see how they were by themselves and then met each other. I really liked the romantic ending.

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